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  • vinteuil
    Full Member
    • Nov 2010
    • 12936

    Originally posted by gurnemanz View Post
    I couldn't really object to "gotten" which is the historical past participle which the British still use in the derivatives "forgotten" and "begotten" and the fossilised form "ill-gotten".

    There again, I still remember a quote from Shakespeare's Antony and Cleo, umpteen years after learning it for A Level, in which Enobarbus sarcastically observes:
    "That truth should be silent I had almost forgot".
    ... and the line which shd sear itself in to the mind of any hearer - Albany, who has forgotten the important info re Cordelia -


    KENT I am come
    To bid my king and master aye good night:
    Is he not here?

    ALBANY Great thing of us forgot!
    Speak, Edmund, where's the king? and where's Cordelia?   


    [ King Lear, V iii 275-279 ]

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    Last edited by vinteuil; 09-11-18, 17:28.

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    • Serial_Apologist
      Full Member
      • Dec 2010
      • 37814

      Originally posted by Pabmusic View Post
      Fall = autumn?; "I loaned her some money"?; normalcy?; "zee" (for zed)?; gotten?
      Also used by some Scottish-born people, evidently. Some....

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      • french frank
        Administrator/Moderator
        • Feb 2007
        • 30456

        Originally posted by vinteuil View Post
        ... and the line which shd sear itself in to the mind of any hearer
        I see no reason why gunpowder treason should ever be forgot.
        It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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        • french frank
          Administrator/Moderator
          • Feb 2007
          • 30456

          Meanwhile it looks as if lead/led will be the next bastion to fall to analogy; but why not read/red, I wonder, rather than lead/lead?
          It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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          • kernelbogey
            Full Member
            • Nov 2010
            • 5803

            who/whom

            She switched labels, to BMG, whom she said treated her like a “legacy artist”. Guardian 14.1.19

            This is the second time recently I've come across this construction in the last few days. Gramatically, it's surely incorrect - proved by taking she said out of the sentence.

            But (as I say increasingly frequently to my pedantic part) it's comprehensible so what does it matter?

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            • Pabmusic
              Full Member
              • May 2011
              • 5537

              Originally posted by kernelbogey View Post
              who/whom

              She switched labels, to BMG, whom she said treated her like a “legacy artist”. Guardian 14.1.19

              This is the second time recently I've come across this construction in the last few days. Gramatically, it's surely incorrect - proved by taking she said out of the sentence.

              But (as I say increasingly frequently to my pedantic part) it's comprehensible so what does it matter?

              Views?
              It's definitely incorrect (if you restructed the text you wouldn't say "him treated her like...").

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              • ferneyhoughgeliebte
                Gone fishin'
                • Sep 2011
                • 30163

                Originally posted by Pabmusic View Post
                It's definitely incorrect (if you restructed the text you wouldn't say "him treated her like...").
                [FONT=Comic Sans MS][I][B]Numquam Satis![/B][/I][/FONT]

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                • Mal
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                  • Dec 2016
                  • 892

                  Originally posted by kernelbogey View Post
                  who/whom

                  She switched labels, to BMG, whom she said treated her like a “legacy artist”. Guardian 14.1.19

                  This is the second time recently I've come across this construction in the last few days. Gramatically, it's surely incorrect - proved by taking she said out of the sentence.

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                  It's comprehensible and didn't seem wrong when I first read it. Taking out the "she said" makes "whom" seem immediately wrong. But "who" or "whom" don't grate, on me, when "she said" is left in. My knowledge of grammar is awful, though, and tolerance quite high :) But might it be possible that leaving "she said" in allows for the use of "whom". Maybe I should try and learn some grammar, so here's a quote from grammarly.com:

                  "Whom should be used to refer to the object of a verb or preposition. When in doubt, try this simple trick: If you can replace the word with “he”' or “'she,” use who. If you can replace it with “him” or “her,” use whom. Who should be used to refer to the subject of a sentence."

                  Can BMG be a "who" are "whom" when it's not a "he" or a "she"? Using "it" seems strange, but repeating "BMG" seems awkward. I read the following lengthy blog post, which suggests you can use plural "they" or singular "it" depending on circumstance:

                  In the past week, two clients have written to ask whether they should refer to their company or division using the singular it or a plural pronoun. Below are their examples, slightly disguised. The underlining indicates the pronoun they doubted. Company X wishes to express our… continue reading


                  I think we can extend grammarlys example for the "they" case, though being pedantic one would wish confirmation of this. So, I think we can replace "BMG" with “they”, but not "them", and therefore must use who.

                  But "whom" still doesn't make me upset, no intuitive pedant me, I'm a lost clause :)

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                  • french frank
                    Administrator/Moderator
                    • Feb 2007
                    • 30456

                    Originally posted by kernelbogey View Post
                    who/whom

                    She switched labels, to BMG, whom she said treated her like a “legacy artist”. Guardian 14.1.19

                    This is the second time recently I've come across this construction in the last few days. Gramatically, it's surely incorrect - proved by taking she said out of the sentence.

                    But (as I say increasingly frequently to my pedantic part) it's comprehensible so what does it matter?

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                    My view is that it would have been better to have included commas (or even parenthesis) as that would surely(!!??) have made the mistake impossible to make in the first place: 'who(m), she said, treated her…

                    Does it matter? What does matter? It might indicate poor powers of analysis, though for most people that hardly matters anyway.
                    It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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                    • Mal
                      Full Member
                      • Dec 2016
                      • 892

                      Anyway, thanks for pointing me to the Guardian they are relaying Andy Murray's "last match" live. Long match, looks like a five setter, ouch!

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                      • gurnemanz
                        Full Member
                        • Nov 2010
                        • 7405

                        Originally posted by Mal View Post
                        It's comprehensible and didn't seem wrong when I first read it.
                        I assume that is why the writer who correctly used "whom she met" earlier in the text, got it wrong. On the surface it appears right, along the lines: If "whom she met" is correct then "whom she said " must also be.
                        Not quite the same, but years ago I read Chomsky and remember him illustrating deep structure and surface structure using the pair of phrases, "eager to please" and "easy to please". On the surface their structure appears identical but at a deeper syntactic level the first is active and the second is passive.

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                        • kernelbogey
                          Full Member
                          • Nov 2010
                          • 5803

                          Originally posted by french frank View Post
                          Does it matter? What does matter?
                          I wouldn't have written that, even with the commas. But 'should' I be complaining about others writing thus?

                          I think it's pedantic teaching about who/whom, I/me that has led folks to overcorrect themselves into a mistake. An educated friend regularly makes sentences like 'It was a gift to Susan and I'; and another says 'Jane and me would love to see you....' I bite my tongue in their presences.

                          Me seems now to be so widely used in the subject position that I think the 'correct' usage to be irretrievable.

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                          • ferneyhoughgeliebte
                            Gone fishin'
                            • Sep 2011
                            • 30163

                            Originally posted by Mal View Post
                            If you can replace the word with “he”' or “'she,” use who. If you can replace it with “him” or “her,” use whom. Who should be used to refer to the subject of a sentence."

                            Can BMG be a "who" are "whom" when it's not a "he" or a "she"?
                            If you add "they" to the "he" and "she" examples, and "them" to the "him" and "her", it might make things clearer.

                            "Who treated her badly?" "They did". (Or "he did" or "she did")
                            "By whom was she badly treated?" "By them" (or "by her" or by him").
                            [FONT=Comic Sans MS][I][B]Numquam Satis![/B][/I][/FONT]

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                            • ferneyhoughgeliebte
                              Gone fishin'
                              • Sep 2011
                              • 30163

                              Originally posted by kernelbogey View Post
                              An educated friend regularly makes sentences like 'It was a gift to Susan and I'; and another says 'Jane and me would love to see you....' I bite my tongue in their presences.
                              There was a Head of English (I kid thee not) at a Grammar School (ditto) who always said things like "speak to Mrs Smith or I if you're interested" in Assemblies.
                              [FONT=Comic Sans MS][I][B]Numquam Satis![/B][/I][/FONT]

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                              • ferneyhoughgeliebte
                                Gone fishin'
                                • Sep 2011
                                • 30163

                                Originally posted by gurnemanz View Post
                                I assume that is why the writer who correctly used "whom she met" earlier in the text, got it wrong. On the surface it appears right, along the lines: If "whom she met" is correct then "whom she said " must also be.
                                Not in this particular context - "whom she met" ("she met him/them") is correct - the verb is "met" and is done with here ("she met him outside the pub"). With "whom she said", the verb isn't complete - we're still waiting for what they had done ("had treated her badly" is the focus of this sentence, not what the woman had said had happened). "They (she said) had treated her badly" - "who (she said) had treated her badly".


                                ("whom she said" would work in a context such as "The Officers of the FBI, for whom she said she had nothing but contempt, treated her badly")
                                [FONT=Comic Sans MS][I][B]Numquam Satis![/B][/I][/FONT]

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