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  • gurnemanz
    Full Member
    • Nov 2010
    • 7405

    The Radio 4 News has just stated that "farmers will be harvesting 30% fewer crops this year". Although it is usually appropriate to use "fewer" rather than "less" with a plural noun, it struck me that this might actually be a case of hypercorrection. Wouldn't "fewer crops" be a smaller number of types of crop? Wouldn't it be permissible to refer to "30% less crops" with "crops", though plural in form actually behaving like a non-count? As with "Eat less sweets!" Am I being hyperpedantic or maybe just wrong?

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    • jean
      Late member
      • Nov 2010
      • 7100

      Originally posted by gurnemanz View Post
      ...it struck me that this might actually be a case of hypercorrection...
      Most definitely.

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      • french frank
        Administrator/Moderator
        • Feb 2007
        • 30456

        Originally posted by jean View Post
        I know it's late, but conjugations, please. This thread is for pedants, after all.

        (Should you wish to edit, I'll delete evidence of my objection.)
        No. I'll leave the evidence of my shame as an exercise in humbleness

        Coniug-are, conjug-ation being an example of the verbal pattern I was burbling about.
        It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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        • Eine Alpensinfonie
          Host
          • Nov 2010
          • 20572

          Originally posted by gurnemanz View Post
          The Radio 4 News has just stated that "farmers will be harvesting 30% fewer crops this year". Although it is usually appropriate to use "fewer" rather than "less" with a plural noun, it struck me that this might actually be a case of hypercorrection. Wouldn't "fewer crops" be a smaller number of types of crop? Wouldn't it be permissible to refer to "30% less crops" with "crops", though plural in form actually behaving like a non-count? As with "Eat less sweets!" Am I being hyperpedantic or maybe just wrong?
          How about 30% smaller crops. It isn't always a choice between "less" and "fewer"' as in the ....emissions debate, where lower emissions would be a better choice.

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          • jean
            Late member
            • Nov 2010
            • 7100

            Originally posted by Eine Alpensinfonie View Post
            How about 30% smaller crops.
            That would imply dwarf varieties, which I don't think is what was meant.

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            • Bryn
              Banned
              • Mar 2007
              • 24688

              So, 30% lower crop yield, yes?

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              • Pabmusic
                Full Member
                • May 2011
                • 5537

                Originally posted by gurnemanz View Post
                The Radio 4 News has just stated that "farmers will be harvesting 30% fewer crops this year". Although it is usually appropriate to use "fewer" rather than "less" with a plural noun, it struck me that this might actually be a case of hypercorrection. Wouldn't "fewer crops" be a smaller number of types of crop? Wouldn't it be permissible to refer to "30% less crops" with "crops", though plural in form actually behaving like a non-count? As with "Eat less sweets!" Am I being hyperpedantic or maybe just wrong?
                The trouble is that the Radio 4 news item means something different from what I'm sure was meant. "30% fewer crops" suggests (or ought to suggest) that, instead of wheat, barley and oats, they'll harvest just the wheat and barley. The problem is caused by using 'crops' as a singular collective noun. "Farmers will harvest 30% less" or "harvests will produce 30% less" would have been better. What else do farmers harvest but crops?

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                • Boilk
                  Full Member
                  • Dec 2010
                  • 976

                  Originally posted by gurnemanz View Post
                  The Radio 4 News has just stated that "farmers will be harvesting 30% fewer crops this year". Although it is usually appropriate to use "fewer" rather than "less" with a plural noun, it struck me that this might actually be a case of hypercorrection. Wouldn't "fewer crops" be a smaller number of types of crop? Wouldn't it be permissible to refer to "30% less crops" with "crops", though plural in form actually behaving like a non-count? As with "Eat less sweets!" Am I being hyperpedantic or maybe just wrong?
                  Without even seeing Bryn's post above, it immediately stuck me that what they really meant was "30% lower crop yield". 'Yield' clears up the 'fewer crops' error - it will presumably be the usual number of crop varieties! Silly BBC R4 news editor - and not for the first time.

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                  • Pabmusic
                    Full Member
                    • May 2011
                    • 5537

                    Originally posted by Boilk View Post
                    Without even seeing Bryn's post above, it immediately stuck me that what they really meant was "30% lower crop yield". 'Yield' clears up the 'fewer crops' error - it will presumably be the usual number of crop varieties! Silly BBC R4 news editor - and not for the first time.
                    The more I think of it, the more I feel it would have been better to recast the sentence entirely. "This year's harvest will be only 70% of last year's" or better still "the size of this year's harvest will be about two-thirds of last year's".

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                    • mercia
                      Full Member
                      • Nov 2010
                      • 8920

                      Britain's wheat harvest could be a third smaller than it was last year because of extreme weather conditions, the National Farmers' Union warns.


                      "wheat crop down by third" - "wheat harvest could be 30% smaller" - "a smaller area was planted" - "lower-than-normal crop yield"

                      I guess if you plant less, inevitably you will harvest less
                      Last edited by mercia; 14-06-13, 06:45.

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                      • french frank
                        Administrator/Moderator
                        • Feb 2007
                        • 30456

                        Originally posted by mercia View Post
                        http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-22866982

                        "wheat crop down by third" - "wheat harvest could be 30% smaller" - "a smaller area was planted" - "lower-than-normal crop yield".
                        Which article contains a usage which I immediately thought of in connection with 'plethora', namely the phrase 'a myriad of factors'.

                        I admit that my own usage would be 'myriad factors', though I see a discussion of this point here which makes sense. Adjective or noun?
                        It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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                        • mercia
                          Full Member
                          • Nov 2010
                          • 8920

                          Originally posted by french frank View Post
                          Adjective or noun?
                          Oxford online says both

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                          • french frank
                            Administrator/Moderator
                            • Feb 2007
                            • 30456

                            Was just wondering today whether there was any sociological significance to the change (has there been one?) from 'swimming baths' to 'swimming pool'? Our old Bristol North Baths were closed recently for conversion, so no longer contain the swimming pool (replaced by the '(swimming) pool' at the new Leisure Centre up the road. And I see the 'Acton Swimming Baths' are of a similiar date (1904) - and are being also converted.
                            It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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                            • mercia
                              Full Member
                              • Nov 2010
                              • 8920

                              in ye olden days weren't the public baths somewhere one could go literally to take a bath (and wash your clothes) as well as go for a swim ?

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                              • french frank
                                Administrator/Moderator
                                • Feb 2007
                                • 30456

                                Originally posted by mercia View Post
                                in ye olden days weren't the public baths somewhere one could go literally to take a bath (and wash your clothes) as well as go for a swim ?
                                I assume so, though I'm not sure whether you took your 'bath' in the swimming pool or whether there were separate bathing facilities (in baths).
                                It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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