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  • AuntDaisy
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    • Jun 2018
    • 1243

    BBC headline "Why scientists are studying whales with a crossbow"

    I had visions of a harpoon-wielding Moby Dick (or Duck*) hunting the Pequod...

    Do the whales pass the crossbow amongst themselves, ready for the scientist to study them?


    * "Evening, Vicar"... "It's not every day you see a giant duck with a wooden leg". RTH 5/6/1966

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    • Pulcinella
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      • Feb 2014
      • 10249

      Equally awkward is this, from the Guardian. Why not just to record an interview?

      Rishi Sunak has been criticised for leaving the D-day commemorations in Normandy early on Thursday, with reports that he returned to the UK to do a prerecorded TV interview.

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      • oddoneout
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        • Nov 2015
        • 8634

        Originally posted by Pulcinella View Post
        Equally awkward is this, from the Guardian. Why not just to record an interview?

        Rishi Sunak has been criticised for leaving the D-day commemorations in Normandy early on Thursday, with reports that he returned to the UK to do a prerecorded TV interview.
        If it was prerecorded why did he need to return? In any case these days I thought the advance of tech meant that physical presence was needed for such things - a room and some kit and post- recording editing would do?

        I've just read a report and now see that it wasn't a prerecorded interview(ie one done earlier as I thought), but just an election promo/misinformation video. His apology made sure we knew he didn't stay -
        I returned back to the UK.
        Nothing like a bit of tautology to reinforce a statement.
        Can't help thinking that a certain previous PM wouldn't have passed up the chance for more photo-ops with the assembled leaders...
        Last edited by oddoneout; 07-06-24, 08:38.

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        • Pulcinella
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          • Feb 2014
          • 10249

          Originally posted by oddoneout View Post

          If it was prerecorded why did he need to return? In any case these days I thought the advance of tech meant that physical presence was needed for such things - a room and some kit and post- recording editing would do?

          I've just read a report and now see that it wasn't a prerecorded interview(ie one done earlier as I thought), but just an election promo/misinformation video. His apology made sure we knew he didn't stay - Nothing like a bit of tautology to reinforce a statement.
          Can't help thinking that a certain previous PM wouldn't have passed up the chance for more photo-ops with the assembled leaders...
          Indeed!
          (Did you miss a NOT out, ooo? .... presence NOT needed?)
          Last edited by Pulcinella; 07-06-24, 09:34. Reason: Misplaced space corrected!

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          • french frank
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            • Feb 2007
            • 29503

            Originally posted by Pulcinella View Post

            Indeed!
            (Did you miss a NOT out ,ooo? .... presence NOT needed?)
            Pedant!
            It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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            • Pulcinella
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              • Feb 2014
              • 10249

              Originally posted by french frank View Post

              Pedant!
              Isn't that the whole point of this thread?

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              • Old Grumpy
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                • Jan 2011
                • 3376

                Originally posted by Pulcinella View Post

                Isn't that the whole point of this thread?
                At least ooo didn't miss a point [.], or commit an apostrophic misdemeanour.

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                • Pulcinella
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                  • Feb 2014
                  • 10249

                  Originally posted by Old Grumpy View Post

                  At least ooo didn't miss a point [.], or commit an apostrophic misdemeanour.
                  I see that I got my own punctuation (spacing) wrong though!
                  Now corrected (though I've been quoted: ).

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                  • oddoneout
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                    • Nov 2015
                    • 8634

                    Originally posted by Pulcinella View Post

                    Indeed!
                    (Did you miss a NOT out, ooo? .... presence NOT needed?)
                    Drat! Well spotted. Another sin of omission to add to the list.

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                    • french frank
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                      • Feb 2007
                      • 29503

                      Originally posted by Pulcinella View Post
                      (Did you miss a NOT out, ooo? [...])
                      I'm wondering: Would "Did you miss out a NOT, ooo?" be an improvement, or does it make no real difference?
                      It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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                      • Pulcinella
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                        • Feb 2014
                        • 10249

                        Originally posted by french frank View Post

                        I'm wondering: Would "Did you miss out a NOT, ooo?" be an improvement, or does it make no real difference?
                        Possibly a hangover from not supposedly not ending a sentence with a preposition (and that the expression is 'to miss out = to omit') makes your version sound a little easier on the ear.

                        But I think I'd prefer 'Did you miss something out?' to 'Did you miss out something?'.

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                        • gurnemanz
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                          • Nov 2010
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                          Originally posted by Pulcinella View Post

                          Possibly a hangover from not supposedly not ending a sentence with a preposition (and that the expression is 'to miss out = to omit') makes your version sound a little easier on the ear.

                          But I think I'd prefer 'Did you miss something out?' to 'Did you miss out something?'.
                          Also because "something" is a pronoun. No one would say: "You missed out it" or "She missed out me". When the object is a noun some may prefer "He missed out the apostrophe" to "He missed the apostrophe out". Both are acceptable, I'd have thought.

                          It is probably poor style to split 'miss' from 'out' if the object consists of many words. As in something like: "The programme missed the names of all the members of the orchestra and chorus out". ...Or just use "omit"

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                          • Pulcinella
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                            • Feb 2014
                            • 10249

                            Originally posted by gurnemanz View Post

                            Also because "something" is a pronoun. No one would say: "You missed out it" or "She missed out me". When the object is a noun some may prefer "He missed out the apostrophe" to "He missed the apostrophe out". Both are acceptable, I'd have thought.

                            It is probably poor style to split 'miss' from 'out' if the object consists of many words. As in something like: "The programme missed the names of all the members of the orchestra and chorus out". ...Or just use "omit"

                            That all makes good sense.

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                            • Roger Webb
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                              • Feb 2024
                              • 715

                              Originally posted by gurnemanz View Post



                              It is probably poor style to split 'miss' from 'out' if the object consists of many words. As in something like: "The programme missed the names of all the members of the orchestra and chorus out". ...Or just use "omit"
                              We were taught (in the late 50s/early 60s) that placing the preposition at the end of a sentence was a crime as heinous as splitting an infinitive! I have a pang of remorse over the latter, not so much the former.

                              Churchill once gave an example of the clumsiness of 'correctness' with the sentence '.......this is something with which I won't up put'.

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                              • french frank
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                                • Feb 2007
                                • 29503

                                Originally posted by Roger Webb View Post
                                Churchill once gave an example of the clumsiness of 'correctness' with the sentence '.......this is something with which I won't up put'.
                                A learned note from the lexicographer Ben Zimmer on the attribution (or misattribution) to Churchill; and the various forms the quotation took:

                                It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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