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  • gurnemanz
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    • Nov 2010
    • 7405

    The future is by its very nature uncertain and can involve a subtle mixture of intention, desire, planning and inevitability​. I taught English as a foreign language to advanced students for quite a few years and I remember it not being easy to explain the difference between the various ways of expressing the future.

    We don't have a future tense, as in an inflected verb form like the French: Je partirai (I will leave) and we can choose either the present tense, modal verbs: will, shall, or going to.

    All of these four options have corresponding present continuous partners to give at least eight variants:

    ​I leave tomorrow
    I'm leaving tomorrow

    I shall leave tomorrow
    I shall be leaving tomorrow

    I will leave tomorrow
    I will be leaving tomorrow

    I'm going to leave tomorrow
    I'm going to be leaving tomorrow​

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    • Pulcinella
      Host
      • Feb 2014
      • 11062

      But will you be leaving on purpose (because you can't bear the place any longer) or purposefully (by striding out with giant steps), or both?

      I think I prefer the construction 'with a particular purpose in mind' to 'on purpose'. But that might be subtly different, I guess.

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      • AuntDaisy
        Host
        • Jun 2018
        • 1771

        Gurnemanz, what do you think of the mellifluous "I will have been leaving tomorrow"?

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        • french frank
          Administrator/Moderator
          • Feb 2007
          • 30456

          Originally posted by oddoneout View Post

          It may be tautological but it adds emphasis to an action which may well not be a positive one - yah boo sucks, dares (familiar in the world of children), or in the context of something done out of spite or similar sentiment.
          I didn't say it was impossible or incorrect or ungrammatical. I said it would be "very odd". The example you give does, in my view, indeed suggest it would be "very odd". Someone may act in exactly the way you describe but it would be "very odd" for them to pronounce it in public in advance, wouldn't it?.
          It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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          • french frank
            Administrator/Moderator
            • Feb 2007
            • 30456

            Originally posted by AuntDaisy View Post
            Gurnemanz, what do you think of the mellifluous "I will have been leaving tomorrow"?
            Hmm. How does that fit with 'tomorrow'? The 'I will have been -ing' has a use: e.g. 'By the time I get to Phoenix I will have been travelling for 72 hours'. I suppose it would also as 'By tomorrow I will have been travelling &c &c ..'. I'm not sure about "I will have been leaving tomorrow"
            It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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            • Serial_Apologist
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              • Dec 2010
              • 37814

              "Brand has offered no admittance of guilt" - heard on TV yesterday. Surely that should have been "no admission of guilt"? Then I thought, admission or admittance? - both words stem from admit. But both are indicative of that which can be admitted, so can either one be right in this particular instance?

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              • french frank
                Administrator/Moderator
                • Feb 2007
                • 30456

                Originally posted by Serial_Apologist View Post
                "Brand has offered no admittance of guilt" - heard on TV yesterday. Surely that should have been "no admission of guilt"? Then I thought, admission or admittance? - both words stem from admit. But both are indicative of that which can be admitted, so can either one be right in this particular instance?
                But I think the verb admit has two distinct meanings: to admit to a crime is a different usage from to admit someone to membership, to a meeting or in the phrase No Admittance. Is the first always intransitive, the second transitive? I'm not sure. I feel though that admission can be used in both senses but admittance only in the second.
                It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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                • Serial_Apologist
                  Full Member
                  • Dec 2010
                  • 37814

                  Originally posted by french frank View Post

                  But I think the verb admit has two distinct meanings: to admit to a crime is a different usage from to admit someone to membership, to a meeting or in the phrase No Admittance. Is the first always intransitive, the second transitive? I'm not sure. I feel though that admission can be used in both senses but admittance only in the second.
                  Yes, that makes sense.

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                  • smittims
                    Full Member
                    • Aug 2022
                    • 4328

                    I was perturbed by the phrase 'has offered no admittance of guilt'. That sounds to me like a bending of the situation. It suggests to me that guilt exists but that he refuses to accept it. I know that is what some people think, but in fact he emphatically denied the allegations, which to me is a different matter.

                    It's a bit like 'answer me yes or no, have you stopped beating your wife?'

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                    • Pulcinella
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                      • Feb 2014
                      • 11062

                      Thought for the day number 1.

                      I'm increasingly seeing an unnecessary duplication of the word 'that' in sentences such as this, from a letter in today's Times:

                      It is vital that, at a time when we regularly read of schools and other postwar public buildings being closed owing to the use of untested building materials, that the traditional skills and crafts that have been handed down over the centuries should be exploited, not just for today but for the benefit of future generations.
                      Last edited by Pulcinella; 26-09-23, 05:38.

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                      • Pulcinella
                        Host
                        • Feb 2014
                        • 11062

                        Thought for the day number 2.

                        If you lived in York, not Trowbridge, you'd know the difference between a gargoyle and a grotesque:

                        Face off in planning row as builder erects gargoyle councillor (headline in today's Times).

                        PS: The Indy also calls it a gargoyle, but the Guardian gets it right:

                        The grotesque – a carving of monstrous features with no functional architectural purpose, as opposed to a gargoyle, which is a statue with a spout to convey water away from the sides of a building – went up about three weeks ago after nearly three years of dispute between Thomas and planning authorities.
                        Last edited by Pulcinella; 26-09-23, 06:16. Reason: PS added. Hurrah for the Grauniad!

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                        • smittims
                          Full Member
                          • Aug 2022
                          • 4328

                          Quite right. And in your previous post, the first 'that' is the redundant one, surely.

                          I expect these people have to write too quickly to allow corrections.

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                          • Pulcinella
                            Host
                            • Feb 2014
                            • 11062

                            Originally posted by smittims View Post
                            Quite right. And in your previous post, the first 'that' is the redundant one, surely.

                            I expect these people have to write too quickly to allow corrections.
                            You'd expect the Letters Editor to do a better job, though.

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                            • french frank
                              Administrator/Moderator
                              • Feb 2007
                              • 30456

                              Originally posted by Pulcinella View Post

                              You'd expect the Letters Editor to do a better job, though.
                              Yes, if it was a letter sent in by a reader they could have added [sic] after one or the other of the thats.
                              It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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                              • oddoneout
                                Full Member
                                • Nov 2015
                                • 9272

                                Originally posted by Pulcinella View Post

                                You'd expect the Letters Editor to do a better job, though.
                                The job's primary purpose these days is, I suspect, to ensure no legal fallout, but I don't believe the letter quoted would ever have been subject to the kind of style micro-editing being suggested here.In any case, a great many of those reading it won't have seen a problem - possibly because they are only skim reading, or because they speak/write in the same way.

                                I would have omitted the first "that" and also the later "that have been".

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