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  • Nick Armstrong
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    • Nov 2010
    • 26516

    #16
    Originally posted by Cockney Sparrow View Post

    … longest unbroken paragraph …
    Ars longa, vita brevis…
    "...the isle is full of noises,
    Sounds and sweet airs, that give delight and hurt not.
    Sometimes a thousand twangling instruments
    Will hum about mine ears, and sometime voices..."

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    • french frank
      Administrator/Moderator
      • Feb 2007
      • 30213

      #17
      Originally posted by Cockney Sparrow View Post

      You've won the award for the longest unbroken paragraph - previously there have been a few contenders for that honour.
      [ ... [ Once or twice, I've copied a post by cut and paste and put it into paragraphs, which I then find tolerable.... I suppose that's just me, although I remember being gratified to read a pronouncement by, IIRC, Lord Denning (Master of the Rolls?) commending appropriate length paragraphs, in court submissions and judgements.
      I do the same. There is also an optimal length for a line (though online one can often adjust it - annoyingly, not always). In my newspaper days there was also an optimal length (words or lines) for the intro to a story. These were based on a supposed ease of reading.

      So I shall copy the (currently) antipenultimate post into a Word doc and study it from there. (Like Captain Oates, I may be gone some time ...)

      PS Now antiantipenultimate.
      It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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      • french frank
        Administrator/Moderator
        • Feb 2007
        • 30213

        #18
        Oh, that's what it is!
        It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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        • Mandryka
          Full Member
          • Feb 2021
          • 1531

          #19
          I think it's rather more beguiling as one unbroken effusion. Like Molly Bloom's. I was kind of hoping one of the composers here would set it to music.

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          • Eine Alpensinfonie
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            • Nov 2010
            • 20569

            #20
            Do you really want the thread to be deleted?

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            • Serial_Apologist
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              • Dec 2010
              • 37563

              #21
              Originally posted by Mandryka View Post
              I think it's rather more beguiling as one unbroken effusion. Like Molly Bloom's. I was kind of hoping one of the composers here would set it to music.
              A lot of legal documents are written without punctuation - if not all, presumably. Perhaps just a particular category.

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              • french frank
                Administrator/Moderator
                • Feb 2007
                • 30213

                #22
                Originally posted by Serial_Apologist View Post

                A lot of legal documents are written without punctuation - if not all, presumably. Perhaps just a particular category.
                As in Wills (with capital W):

                "Punctuation was traditionally omitted in legal documents and this practise [sic] is continued by many Will and Trust drafters. Drafters prefer instead to use underlining or spacing to avoid the ordinary use of commas."

                Still not quite sure why. But individual writers have individual habits for one reason or none.
                It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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                • eighthobstruction
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                  • Nov 2010
                  • 6426

                  #23
                  One for Around the Horne fans - Bona Vacantia....
                  Last edited by eighthobstruction; 23-11-23, 18:56.
                  bong ching

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                  • Cockney Sparrow
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                    • Jan 2014
                    • 2281

                    #24
                    Originally posted by french frank View Post

                    As in Wills (with capital W):

                    "Punctuation was traditionally omitted in legal documents and this practise [sic] is continued by many Will and Trust drafters. Drafters prefer instead to use underlining or spacing to avoid the ordinary use of commas."

                    Still not quite sure why. But individual writers have individual habits for one reason or none.
                    I'd be interested to see use of underlining or spacing instead to see if it would give me a fighting chance on the comprehension front. I had experience of legal documents, to any depth, in only one field (albeit that which I composed would be used in the High Court) . The guidance for acceptable documents provided for paragraphs.

                    Originally posted by eighthobstruction View Post
                    .STET......I have no idea what this thread is about - it has morphed....
                    Thread morph is almost obligatory here, isn't it?

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                    • Nick Armstrong
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                      • Nov 2010
                      • 26516

                      #25
                      Originally posted by eighthobstruction View Post
                      One for Around the Horne fans - Bona Vacantia....
                      …. as long as you use very bold type
                      "...the isle is full of noises,
                      Sounds and sweet airs, that give delight and hurt not.
                      Sometimes a thousand twangling instruments
                      Will hum about mine ears, and sometime voices..."

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                      • eighthobstruction
                        Full Member
                        • Nov 2010
                        • 6426

                        #26
                        ....Ah yes we have a very bold type just so everybody can see it....those Times New Romans always have a twinkle in their eye when ever they get a view....
                        bong ching

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                        • cloughie
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                          • Dec 2011
                          • 22110

                          #27
                          Originally posted by french frank View Post

                          Having an undiluted feeling celebrating the entire creative process of 'language', how did the BBC pronounce it?
                          Sounded more French to me.

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                          • Old Grumpy
                            Full Member
                            • Jan 2011
                            • 3594

                            #28
                            Originally posted by eighthobstruction View Post
                            ....Ah yes we have a very bold type just so everybody can see it....those Times New Romans always have a twinkle in their eye when ever they get a view....
                            Weren't they a band in the 70s?

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                            • french frank
                              Administrator/Moderator
                              • Feb 2007
                              • 30213

                              #29
                              Originally posted by cloughie View Post

                              Sounded more French to me.
                              Sya-rong?
                              It isn't given us to know those rare moments when people are wide open and the lightest touch can wither or heal. A moment too late and we can never reach them any more in this world.

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                              • Padraig
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                                • Feb 2013
                                • 4220

                                #30
                                The few times I heard the name of the storm pronounced, only once was it 'correct', and that was by a BBC weatherman on the BBC News. In NI BBC News I more often heard Keeren or Keern, which was my own pronunciation, and it was spelt with a K, which does not exist in Irish. When a newcomer from the Republic spelled his name with a C, we learned how he pronounced Ciaran - which was Keerawn, with the emphasis on the second syllable.

                                I don't know how to do accents, so the fada (long) over the second 'a' of Ciaran is missing.

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